Hindsight | Drama (Draft 2)
Logline*: When a hitchhiker sticks up the old man who picks him up, the old man must talk him down.
Status: Currently trying to figure out how to optimize page space. The current draft is the one I wrote several years back that actually did pretty well in one contest. In terms of optimization, I just have to get rid of a lot of parentheticals. I’ll probably end up polishing up the prose and dialogue while I’m at it.
This is a project that in all likelihood I’ll shoot in the near future. Before I get to the shotlists and storyboards, the script needs to be ironed out as much as possible.
*Logline subject to change.